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I see a dancing plankton. Very happy piece.

Great sense of movement. Good Color choices. Interesting symbols. Good use of materials and technique. I like the use of line and colored versus white space. Good variation in line thickness and quality.

It is also very musical, along the lines of some of kandinsky's work. like. You could take it further towards a little less sketchy to a more finished piece by increasing the size and perhaps adding texture.

It stands alone as a complete piece at the same time. Small and personal.

This is my very first da critique! Good work!